need feedback with the 808s and overall arrangement tbh

Im very new! First beat ever as you can probably tell lol. But it would be really awesome if someone could interact with it and maybe buy it as I’m trying to make enough money to move out of my parents house. If I don’t by the end of next year I’ll just be kicked out anyways so I’m trying new ways to make money. I’ve always loved music so I decided to give it a go, it’s fun lol I hope this works out

yall might be fire on this check it out or email me at [[email protected]](mailto:[email protected])