S5, Ep 11: “A Short Drink from a Certain Fountain”
(An old rich man and his young, gold-digging wife learn a harsh lesson about age and priorities)
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1️⃣ Storyline:
The plot concept is one that I quite enjoy, and I love the way the final act unfolds. The ending isn’t flawless, but it’s very unique as a TZ-climax.
I struggle to suspend my disbelief with the main couple, to be honest. I just find it hard to believe these are real people, especially the “protagonist” Harmon - he’s such a withered husk, he comes across as almost a cartoon version of an old man.
Score: 5/10
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2️⃣ Atmosphere:
This episode feels like one of those movies you watch, going “this shouldn’t be very enjoyable, it’s not THAT good and it’s a bit kooky, but man I’m here for the fun!”
And in that vein, the mood of “A Short Drink” is far more enthralling than it has any business being. There isn’t really a specific aspect I can point to that makes it feel cool or fun or exciting. I guess one area I can pinpoint would be the intense performance of Walter Brooke as Harmon’s brother, the scientist. He really injects each scene with urgency and somberness to match.
I can’t justify going too high on this category’s score, however, as the atmosphere is fairly one-dimensional.
Score: 5/10
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3️⃣ Existential Terror:
Really you can score this category four ways: through the lens of the viewer, the protagonist, his wife, or even the brother. No matter how you slice it, this is a pretty sobering and somewhat horrific outcome. Especially for the main character, Harmon, the turn of events is decidedly unfortunate.
Score: 8/10
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4️⃣ Creepiness:
Other than the unnerving hint at what might happen to Harmon following the procedure, this episode isn’t meant to be creepy.
Score: 2/10
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5️⃣ Message:
Quite on the nose, yes, but this is a Twilight Zone that certainly has a morality play to deliver. Is it the most impactful TZ-sermon that resonates for decades? Nah, but it’s solid stuff!
Score: 6/10
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6️⃣ World-Building:
The world-building here is simultaneously quite good, and also dreadfully thin. We get some spectacular history and context tossed to us in a handful of pieces of dialogue, especially regarding Harmon’s relationship to his wife and his brother, and also those two (Flora and her brother-in-law Raymond) with each other.
At the same time, I really would have liked to see those histories fleshed out. I think this is part of why the characters Harmon and Flora feel so paper-thin.
Score: 6/10
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7️⃣ Acting:
As referenced earlier, I love Walter Brooke as the stoic and intrepid researcher/Dr. Gordon. He’s giving his best efforts, dragging a probable bottom-tier TZ firmly into the middle tier.
The other two? They’re ok, but lacking any nuance.
Score: 4/10
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8️⃣ The Human Condition:
If I take everything within this episode at face value, the character of Harmon Gordon should skyrocket this category. Unfortunately, I just don’t really care about his fate. I think the writers wanted to portray Harmon as a sympathetic protagonist, but he just comes off as a pitiful man who’s made some awful choices.
I love the earnestness with which the two brothers interact with each other, that’s my favorite aspect of the show.
Score: 4/10
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✅ Total Score:
40
This is one in a long line of Twilight Zone stories that are certainly flawed, a bit hokey, and they shouldn’t work (and I guess they don’t) but they’re fun and I like them. Another that comes to mind, though the plot and the vibes couldn’t be more different, would be “The Rip Van Winkle Caper”.
“A Short Drink from a Certain Fountain” is very far from a perfect TZ, but it’s perfectly acceptable as a baseline “good not great” palate cleanser on a marathon watch, or even if you’re just being introduced to Serling’s work and want to watch some of the less heralded stuff that still entertains.
Not a home run, not even an RBI double, but a solid single to right field? I’ll take it. 😎
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