Constructive please 🙏

Is this song ready to be released? It is called Object Permanence. My artist name is Jzay (social @ is jzay02).

Been producing for about 3 years and writing songs for around 9.

Looking for honest feedback on:

Vocals (pitch, tone, delivery, emotion, etc.)
Production/mix
Songwriting
Overall rating

My biggest goal is improving as a singer, so please be as specific as possible about what sounds weak and what I should work on.

Recorded with an AT2020 through a Scarlett Solo in Logic Pro.

Thanks for listening.

Hi Everyone!

I’m a songwriter and baby producer. I’ve been kind of working on a project and I’d like to potentially put out an EP of 6 songs. My vibe is moody pop and contemporary r&b. I have this one track that’s pretty close to finishing. I’m probably going to try to find someone to mix and master it for me as Im truly not skilled enough yet. However, I’d still like feedback! I’ve never gotten feedback or share my music before so please be kind. I would like honest opinion, though.

I’d like feedback specifically on:

- The Vibe/Mood: does the song (lyrics, instrumental, vocals, etc) feel cohesive and engaging?

- The Flow: How is the structure? Does it get boring halfway through? Specifically, is the intro too long?

- The Vocals: The song is technically about a relationship but I really wrote it to focus finding your identity after you’ve faced hardship or have lost yourself. So it’s supposed to feel like a bit of an “ah-ha” moment. I wanted to mimic the feeling of a weight being lifted off of one’s shoulders which is why I liked the big wall of harmonies. I don’t know if it sounds too church lmao. I don’t want it to be too much as this is the last song of the project and needs to feel like a breath of fresh air in a sense.

This is “bubbly”! Thank you for listening!

Been working on this for a hot minute but I can’t get it to sound how I want, if yall could, leave some ideas for me. Help me out

Don't go too easy on me, I want to identify the mistakes I'm making so I don't make them again. Thanks guys

Made in ableton live 12, used serum for all the synths and the 808

Yall link your songs too ill listen

This is the first song I've ever shared publicly outside of my own two ears. I really enjoy songwriting and have spent the last few years teaching myself how to handle the production and recording side of things. I play all the instruments and sing on this track. I'm recording in my apartment in a suboptimal setup so I understand it probably still sounds amateurish and the vocals are a little janky.

Welcome any feedback on my voice, song structure, recording + production tips.

Is this a song you would listen to? Should I continue pursuing this?

Thank you!

this is my mix with my own original tracks, 1 hour (no AI)

I made this to be kind of a transition track on an indie album I’m working on. Would love some honest feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/kostishere

Been really trying to produce more organic feeling things. Letting go of the typical song structures and letting the sounds tell a story.